this fall i am taking a poetry class. while i love to read poetry isn't normally my thing. i have a book of poems to read by monday and here is one i found interesting.
Winter Syntax
A sentence starts out like a lone traveler
heading into a blizzard at midnight,
tilting into the wind, one arm shielding his face,
the tails of his thin coat flapping behind him.
There are easier ways of making sense,
the connoisseurship of gesture, for example.
You hold a girl's face in your hands like a vase.
You lift a gun from the glove compartment
and toss it out the window into the desert heat.
These cool moments are blazing with silence.
The full moon makes sense. When a cloud crosses it
it becomes as eloquent as a bicycle leaning
outside a drugstore or a dog who sleeps all afternoon
in a corner of the couch.
Bare branches in winter are a form of writing.
The unclothed body is autobiography.
Every lake is a vowel, every island a noun.
But the traveler persists in his misery,
struggling all night through the deepening snow,
leaving a faint alphabet of bootprints
on the white hills and the white floors of valleys,
a message for field mice and passing crows.
At dawn he will spot the vine of smoke
rising from your chimney, and when he stands
before you shivering, draped in sparkling frost,
a smile will appear in the beard of icicles,
and the man will express a complete thought.

3 Comments:
Wow, I really like that one too. I guess I just identify with it in a songwriting sense. I have horrible troubles writing lyrics, nothing ever seemse good enough, and more often that not I just give up because I'm so frustrated. It's a very rare occasion when my sentence or thought gets all the way home in a way that is simple and eloquent. Who wrote this Emily? Thanks for posting it.
it's by billy collins, he was poet laureate of the u.s. from 2001-2003.
I think you would be GREAT at writing poetry Chickey... your randomness makes you perfect! I enjoy random poems like this one... they just scream with eloquence that makes sense to my kind of logic and thought pattern!
~Bubbles
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